THE WRITE SPACE
Some think
that white space
— devoid of ink –
will slow the pace,
allowing
thoughts to enter
the mind of the reader,
but a word in the
center
is just an impeder
and total distraction. When made to search
the margins
to carry the thought along
the audience is lost, left in
the lurch .
the music gets spoiled,
lost is the song.
S t r e t c h e d l i k e t o f f e e, won’t lend poems drama.
When pause is needed,
just add a comma.